Winter
Frosty windows
Avalanches in mountains
People in cozy cafes
Lightning striking
Erratic
By BaiLin Room 18
Welcome to Room 18's blog for 2016. We are a class of enthusiastic Year 3 and 4 learners and our teacher is Mrs Morris.
Awesome Work BaiLin on your Diamante poem. My favourite part out of all of your poem was the last word,Erratic. That is a great way to describe Winter! Anyway great poem and keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteAwesome work BaiLin! It was fabulous work. My favorite part was people in cosy cafes. Anyway good work BaLin :)
ReplyDeleteWow! That was a Amazing winter poem! I agree in the morning there are frosty windows. Keep up the nice work.
ReplyDeleteWow BaiLin. On your diamond poem! you had lots of ideas.My favourite was frozen windows, Avalanches in mountains, and people in cosy cafes.Keep up the great work!!!!
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