Thursday 9 June 2016

Emily's Winter Diamond Poem

    Winter
      Freezing weather
       Rain  pelting  down
         Sitting  by  the  fireplace
        Torrential stormy rain
      Windy squalls
    Chilly  
             


      




By Emily Room 18

2 comments:

  1. Wow Emily you have done an amazing Diamante poem! I really liked when you said 'Torrential storm rain' I especially liked the word Torrential in your poem. Great poem and keep up the amazing work!

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  2. Wow Emily with your diamond poem about winter! One of them are freezing weather that's a excellent way to describe about winter! another great idia is sitting by the fireplace that's another awesome way to describe about winter keep up the great work Emily!

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