Thursday 9 June 2016

Wilmer's Winter Diamond Poem

Winter
Snowy ground
Eating hot porridge
Drinking scrumptious hot chocolate
Storms are approaching
Hail pelting
Freezing!



By Wilmer Room 18

2 comments:

  1. Wow Wilmer! I really enjoyed reading your Diamante Poem! I especially liked this idea, Drinking scrumptious hot chocolate.I really liked the way when you added and adjective like, scrumptious. Anyway, Awesome Effort and keep up the great work!

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  2. Amazing Wilmer! I loved the part where you put eating hot porridge. keep up the Amazing work Wilmer!

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