Autumn
Leaves falling off the trees
Tumbling down
Crunching leaves as we walk
Morning dew on the icy grass
Cold air in the sky
Naked trees everywhere
By Dylan Room 18
Welcome to Room 18's blog for 2016. We are a class of enthusiastic Year 3 and 4 learners and our teacher is Mrs Morris.
Yes Dylan I agree with your last idea, naked trees everywhere! That is starting to happen getting ready for winter! One other idea I liked in your poem was leaves falling off the trees tumbling down. I especially liked the word 'tumbling' in your first idea. Great work Dylan!
ReplyDeleteWell done dylan, I love your descriptive writing!
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