Autumn Poem
Autumn leaves swirling like dancers on a stage
Dew feels all wet on the morning grass
Breezy air brushes past my face
Trees with their deciduous branches
Red, orange, gold and chocolate brown leaves Swaying from the trees
Children jumping, laughing and diving in piles of leaves
Birthdays with rainbow colours filling the fresh Autumn air
Beautiful blue skies as I lie down in the lush green grass
Autumn wishes in my head thinking what will be in store for me the next day!
By Samantha Gerritsen
Room 18
Samantha... Everything you said in your poem is what is outside! You have lots of great ideas in your poem about autumn! I like your similes and adjectives too! =One of my favourite part in your poem is Autumn wishes in my head thinking what will be in store for me in the next day! Great Effort on your poem Samantha!!!
ReplyDeleteWow Samantha! your poem has lots of words! I like your similes and adjectives. my favorite part was '"beautiful blue skies as I lie down in the lush green grass! keep up the good work!
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