Autumn Poem
Golden leaves shiny as gold, crunching up in every step
Orange leaves,crunchy as carrots, floating gently down like a descending feather
Red leaves, red as wine scattered all over the soggy grass
By Wilmer
Welcome to Room 18's blog for 2016. We are a class of enthusiastic Year 3 and 4 learners and our teacher is Mrs Morris.
I really liked reading your poem Wilmer! You used lots of describing words. I especially liked the part of your poem when you said down like a descending feather. Descending is a really big word to use. I definitely think you ate a dictionary! Great job Wilmer!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Wilmer I really liked your story about leaves one of my favourite is leaves crunchy as carrots Keep it up!
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