Sunday, 10 April 2016

Skylar's Cockroach Story retell


I knew it was going to be a bad day.  The lady went screaming as she went out of the room.
“So I am a cockroach!” I was going to share leftover pizza. “You know I might just be an ordinary little guy, but I got friends in high places... see that spider on the ceiling. That is Daddy! He’s not my father but his name is Daddy Long Legs. I  called out, “Yo Daddy,” and he waved back.
“Yo bro, watch out behind you!”  
I looked back. The lady was pointing a can of fly spray in my direction. I dived into a crack in the floor. Then the lady went away so I decided to follow her. She was staring at the computer. She typed in a few words and clicked a button.  On the screen popped up a cockroach. I took a closer look. It was facts about cockroaches. I learned that we can live without our heads for a week and we can live without food for a month! I said to the lady, “Goodnight don’t let the bedbugs bite!”

By Skylar Room 18


  1. Great Job Skylar! I really enjoyed reading you're summary on the story survivor.

  2. We loved hearing your fun and exciting retell of the cockroach story, Survivor. Instead of bad you could say terrifying, extremely bad, horrifying, terrible, horrid or horrible as an adjective.