Sunday 8 May 2016

Autumn Poem by Abby






Autumn Poem
By Abby Room 18

Autumn leaves flutter to the ground
Soft and silky
Leaves all shapes and sizes bright and
clear
Leaves all different colours
Leaves as red as blood
Sparkling in the sun like glitter

Grass dew making your feet wet
Shiny grass and dew melting in the afternoon sun
Gentle wind brushing against my face


5 comments:

  1. Great Job Abby on your writing about Autumn. It was had lots of describing words. You also used lots of great ideas. Keep up the great work Abby!!!

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  2. Well done Abby! I loved the way you described the autumn leaves.

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  3. Great poem Abby I loved it so much.Well done.

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  4. Great poem Abby! Loved all your descriptive words.

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  5. Love your poem Abby you made a very good descriptive poem about Autumn.

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