Wednesday, 11 May 2016

Dylan's Autumn Poem

Leaves falling off the trees
Tumbling down
Crunching leaves as we walk
Morning dew on the icy grass
Cold air in the sky
Naked trees everywhere

By Dylan Room 18


  1. Yes Dylan I agree with your last idea, naked trees everywhere! That is starting to happen getting ready for winter! One other idea I liked in your poem was leaves falling off the trees tumbling down. I especially liked the word 'tumbling' in your first idea. Great work Dylan!

  2. Well done dylan, I love your descriptive writing!