Monday, 9 May 2016

Lucy's Autumn Poem

      Autumn Leaves

Autumn leaves red, orange, purple, brown, yellow, green Floating softly to the ground

Autumn grass spiked up in the air
Wet from the morning dew.

Autumn sky white, blue or pinkish
Pure white clouds like marshmallows

By Lucy Room 18


  1. I really enjoyed reading your poem about autumn Lucy! It was full of adjectives but my favourite part of your autumn poem is your last verse with the simile in it. Pure white clouds like marshmallows. That's a really good simile. When someone reads a poem like yours they can imagine how autumn might look like. Great Effort Lucy!!!

  2. Love your poem Lucy - I liked how you started the sentences each time with "Autumn" then wrote about something different - your poem is just what it is like when we look out the window at the moment!

  3. I like the way you put lots of similes like pure white clouds like marshmallows that was one of my favourite simile Keep up the great work Lucy!

  4. I loved how you said pure white clouds like marshmallows. Now I feel hungry. Keep up the great work.

  5. Good job Lucy, I loved your poem and all the descriptive words you used.

  6. I really liked your poem Lucy great work!