Sunday, 8 May 2016

Winnie's Autumn Poem

Autumn Time by: Winnie Liu Room 18

Autumn fills the air
With the smell of a new day

Sparkly grass from the morning dew
The smell from the morning
trees and leaves.

As I look around, up and down I see
Red, orange, green, brown, gold leaves
Floating down in a colourful pile

The birds are ready to fly away
I love Autumn!


  1. Winnie I really enjoyed reading your poem Autumn time. I liked your first idea especially when you said, Autumn feel the air with the smell of a new day. I enjoyed your poem because they had some describing words. Great Job Winnie and keep up the great work!

  2. Wow Winnie I loved your poem! I liked how you said birds are ready to fly away. Keep up the great job.