Autumn Poem
by Lily Room18
Crispy Crunchy Crackling
Leaves tumbling down
Damp grass foggy grass
From the morning dew
Long leaves short leaves
Skinny leaves all day dropping down
The smell of Autumn breeze coming from the morning trees and leaves
Brown green and yellow tree stumps
Swish! Swish! Swish! Make a Wish!
Wow Lily! Great ideas in your poem! It had lots of describing words to describe the leaves in autumn. My favourite part in your poem was the last idea in your poem. Swish! Swish! Make a wish! Great Job and keep up the great work Lily!
ReplyDeleteLily, we love your Autumn poem! It really conjured up strong images in our minds as to what Autumn is all about.
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
From the Redmond family.
That's an a amazing poem Lily keep it up!
ReplyDeleteWell done Lily I enjoyed reading your poem about autumn I loved the way when you said Crispy crunchy crackling Leaves tumbling down that's a great paragraph of autumn. Great work Lily!!!!!
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